It was a cold Sunday afternoon in Denton Texas as Fatima was getting ready to go to a get together with her mom Nicole, her aunt Alma, and her cousin Nadia.On their way they stopped at an apartment complex because they noticed that the road was closed; “Did you guys see what happened?!” exclaimed a bystander “No I don’t know what did happen?” asked Fatima’s aunt, “T-t-turn a-around…” stuttered another bystander nervously. Once Fatima, Nicole, Alma, and Nadia turned around they saw a car half way wrapped around an electrical pole.”Fatima and I saw a car like that one speeding by but we never thought that this would have happened.” said Nadia. As Fatima, Nicole, Alma, and Nadia along with the two bystanders got as close as they could to the crash Fatima exclaimed “People are still getting pulled out of the car!!” everyone looked closely and in horror one of the bystanders said “If a baby gets pulled out I’m going to cry” and to everyone's relief no baby was pulled out of the car and the people that did get pulled out only had minor injuries; we all took a big sigh of relief as we parted ways, the bystanders when back to the apartment complex and Fatima, Nicole, Alma, and Nadia went to the get together with a story to tell.
idk how to respond to that either
ReplyDeleteI LIKE HOW YOU PUT A LOT OF DETAILS AND USED YOUR OWN NAME
ReplyDeleteI CAN REALLY FEEL MYSELF THERE LIKE THE COLD DAY
MIGHT I ADD MORE DETAIL ATWHAT HAPPEND AT FIRST