This morning ben woke up. He was so excited because today was a special day.
COUGAR DAY! Cougar day is the best day every school year. Ben went to school
with his smile on his face and when he went inside one of the buildings he saw his
friends and hang out until the bell rings for the beginning of school but when it was
the 8th graders turn to go out for cougar day he immediately looked for this friends and when he found his friends it was party time for them. Cougar day is where you get to buy stuff with fake money and go and hangout with friends outside like its a school party and also it has drinks, food and silly stings and MORE!
this very good and very detailed but you need good transitions but is all good
ReplyDeleteneeds work on the punctuation and transition
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