Wednesday, September 4, 2019

The Great Fall


As all the students climbed the steep stairs  to Ms. Simmons’ Language and Literature class. They waited for her to greet them at the door. As the door flew open she was greeting them, then they grabbed their journals and books. As students settled in their seats, and sat on  the red couch with flowers ,Ms. Simmons exclaims ,“WE'RE GOING TO THE GYM.” As all the students raced to the door they went down the stairs and headed to the door leading outside. The cold breeze and rain hit their faces while they treaded up the hill and to the MC Alister’s gym. When they arrived to the Mc Alister gym, you could hear the squeaking shoes of wet feet eight-graders. Coach MacDougall was in the gym with a sixth grade gym class. He immediately stormed out when the eighth-graders arrived.  Then the big kids went inside the gym. As all of them scattered to their friends chaos broke out, someone lost their journal in the bleachers and then some kids climbed the bleachers then the teachers demanded all the students to get off the bleachers. As everyone got off fatima fell off as she reached for help and then boom she fell on the floor! she felt so embarrassed everyone started to laugh!!!!!! 

5 comments:

  1. good story the story was funny but you need to capitalize names

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  2. It was a pretty funny story and it was fun to re-live the experience but you need to capitalize names

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  3. i love how this person said "WE'RE GOING TO THE GYM!"

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  4. i love it because its funny

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  5. You should of capitalize Fatima sense its a name and at the end you should put and between "She was embarrassed" and "Everyone started laughing" and capitalize "She" at the end.

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